अंजुमनउपहारकाव्य संगमगीतगौरव ग्राम गौरवग्रंथदोहे पुराने अंक संकलनअभिव्यक्ति कुण्डलियाहाइकुहास्य व्यंग्यक्षणिकाएँदिशांतर

samasyaapUit- — 
gaunagaunaI QaUp hO – p`ityaaoigata saM#yaa³1´
kavyacacaa-

ApnaI baat — ASaaok caËQar
gaunagaunaI QaUp rajaa Baaoja AaOr imaEaI kI DlaI


maoro ilae yah ek sauKd AaScaya- hO ik dI ga[- samasyaapUit- 'gaunagaunaI QaUp hO' pr Anaok kivataeM imalaIM. KuSaI kI baat [sailae hO @yaaoMik saBaI kivataAaoM ko rMga¸ $p¸ Aakar Alaga–Alaga hOM. [sa vaOivaQya nao hmaaro saamanao ek baD,I na[- AaOr Alaga trh kI caunaaOtI kao saamanao laa KD,a ikyaa hO ik inaNa-ya ka AaQaar @yaa hao¸ ikna kivataAaoM kao EaoYz maanaa jaaya¸ ikna kao caunaa jaae¸ ikna kao purskRt ikyaa jaae. saamanao KUba saarI kivataeM hOM AaOr mana maoM }hapaoh ik inaNa-ya ka AaQaar @yaa hao. saarI kivataeM pZ, laonao ko baad AaOr sauKanauBaUit kI gaunagaunaI QaUp maoM kao[- inaNa-ya donao sao phlao kuC ibandu rKnaa caahta hMU. 

  • phlaa – purskar iktnao haoM AaOr @yaaoMÆ 
  • dUsara –ikna kivataAaoM maoM kivata ko ikna p`itmaanaaoM kao maanak banaayaa jaaya. 
  • tIsara – kivata kI Anaok SaOilayaaM hOM¸ ivaQaaeM hOM¸ ]nakao¸ ]namaoM sao saBaI kao p`itinaiQa%va imala sako [sako ilae @yaa ]pËma ikyaa jaaya. 
  • caaOqaa – @yaa yah du:saahsa BaI ikyaa jaaya ik kiva nao jaao rca idyaa hO¸ ilaK idyaa hO¸ ]sao sauJaava donao kI kaoiSaSa kI jaaya¸ ]sao sauJaava idyaa jaaya. 

maOM ApnaI baat ek bahuEaut kqaa sao p`armBa krnaa caahta hMU jaao maOnao bacapna maoM saunaI—

kha jaata hO ik ]jjaiyanaI ko rajaa Baaoja nao kivayaaoM ka baD,a sa%kar krto qao¸ Aadrmaana doto qao. rajyaaEaya maoM kivata fla–fUla rhI qaI¸ kao[- kh Bar do ik vah kiva hO tao pUra rajatM~ Apnao plak paMvaD,o ibaCa dota qaa kiva ko svaagat maoM. AitiqaSaalaa maoM ]sako ilae EaoYztma vyavasqaaeM haotI qaIM. ]sao itlaikt¸ caMdinat ikyaa jaata qaa¸ sauvaaisat p`asaadaoM maoM pircaairkaeM ]sako carNa QaaotI qaIM AaOr Agalao idna rajaa ko saamanao kiva ApnaI kivata saunaato qao¸ purskar pato qao. 

kivata ko maamalao maoM maOM iksaI saamaMtSaahI vyavasqaa kao nahIM laagaU krnao jaa rha hMU¸ isaf- vah bahuEaut kqaa Aapkao saunaanaa caahta hMU ik iksaI naakara kumhar kI p%naI nao ]laahnaa idyaa ik kuC nahIM kr sakto tao kiva hI bana jaaAao AaOr calao jaaAao rajaa Baaoja ko drbaar maoM. kuC tao puNya imalaogaa¸ kuC tao dixaNaa imalaogaI. Qaikyaae hue ]sa kumhar nao rajaa Baaoja ko drbaar ka maaga- ilayaa¸ p`hiryaaoM nao svaagat ikyaa. Agalao idna jaba ]sao vas~aBaUYaNa sao sausaijjat kr ko drbaar maoM p`stut ikyaa gayaa tba tk baocaaro ko pasa kivata nahIM qaI¸ vah kiva nahIM qaa¸ kivata nahIM banaa payaa. rajaa ko baar baar Aaga`h ike jaanao pr jaba nahIM baaolaa AaOr ]%tojanaa ko ibaMdu tk maaOna fOla AaOr psar gayaa¸ tba jaana pr banatI doK kumhar kao ga[- rat kI GaTnaa yaad Aa ga[- AaOr ]sako maMuh sao Anaayaasa inaklaa—
'iballaI gayaI dUQa lauZ,kaya'. 
rajaa nao kha¸ 'bahut AcCa'. 
yah 'bahut AcCa' ek p`ork t%va bana gayaa AaOr p`aNarxak BaI. kumhar maoM Aa%maivaSvaasa Aa gayaa. 
rajaa nao kha¸ "AgalaI pMi> , , Æ"
,kumhar AgalaI pMi> @yaa banaata baocaara¸ 
]sanao kha¸ "maorI kivata pUrI hao caukI hO maharajaÑ dND doM yaa purskar¸ mauJao svaIkar hO."

gauNaga`ahI AaOr kavyamama-& rajaa nao kha ik yah kivata kOsao hu[-Æ kivata maoM tao gait haotI hO¸ laya haotI hO. kumhar nao kha ik Agar iballaI maoM gait na haotI AaOr vah dbao paMva layabaw na AatI tao dUQa lauZ,kta hI nahIM maharajaÑ inaÉ%tr rajaa nao dubaara kha¸ "kivata maoM tao p````````````````````````````````vaah haota hOÆ"
]%tr t%kala imala gayaa¸ "Aapnao dUQa kao bahto hue nahIM doKa¸ vah p`vaah doKnao yaaogya qaa."
rajaa baaOKlaato¸ [sasao phlao ]nako maistYk maoM ifr ek savaala AaOr pOda huAa¸ "laoikna kivata maoM rsa haota hO¸ kivaraja."
]%tr puna: imalaa "[sa QartI pr dUQa kI maihmaa sao saMBavat: maharaja Apiricat hO. dUQa sao baD,a kao[- rsa [sa saRiYT pr p`kRit nao nahIM banaayaa hO. saBaI jaIvaQaairyaaoM ko ilae ]pyaaogaI hO AaOr jaIvanada[- hO. rsa svayaM dugQa hO maharaja."

Aba qaI carmasaImaaÑ 
rajaa sao na rha gayaa @yaaoMik vao ABaI tk ]sao kivata maananao ko tOyaar nahIM qao. 
]nhaoMnao kha¸ "laoikna kivata maoM kao[- Aqa- haota hO¸ kivavar¸ [saka Aqa- @yaa inaklaaÆ"
yahaM kqaa yaa yao janaEauit hasya pr samaaPt haotI hO. kumhar Acaanak jaagaI hu[- p`%yau%pnna mait sao yaMU kh baOza ik maorI p%naI nao [saIilae Baojaa hO ik Aapko dSa-na haoM AaOr mauJao kivata ko maaQyama sao kuC Aqa- Aqaa-t pOsaa imalao¸ Qana imalao. yah khanaI mauJao Aaja phlaI baar kuC saaocanao pr baaQya kr rhI hO jaba maOMnao gaunagaunaI QaUp hO – samasyaapUit- maoM Aa[- hu[- [na kivataAaoM kao pZ,a. khaM laya¸ khaM CMd¸ khaM tuk¸ khaM p`vaah¸ khaM Aqa-¸ khaM Qvaina¸ khaM iSalp¸ khaM kqya¸ khaM $p AaOr khaM ]saka baa*ya klaovar. [na saarI caIjaaoM ko AaQaar pr kivataAaoM kao doKa jaanaa caaihe.

qaaoD,a QaIrja riKe¸ [sa khanaI sao mauJao k[- inaYkYa- inakalanao hOM. k[- ibandu AaOr ]zanao hOM¸ k[- mau_o saulaJaanao hOM. ijatnao [sa samaya maoro maistYk maoM GaumaD, rho hOM¸ saBaI ko saBaI inakla AaeMgao tao mauJao AcCa lagaogaa. kaoiSaSa krta hMU ik jaao caIjaoM Aa rhI hOM vaao Aap tk phMucaa sakMU. [sa kqaa sao maOM jaao kuC inagaimat krnaa caahta hMU ]sao batanao sao phlao ApnaI [sa AvaQaarNaa kI puiYT pr maugQa hMU ik kao[- BaI kiva hao sakta hO. 

kao[- BaI sao maorI maurad hO¸ manauYya. Agar manauYya hO tao vah kiva hO. ijasako pasa QaD,kta idla hO¸ ijasako pasa AaMKoM hOM ijanasao vah duinayaa kao doKta hO¸ kuC saaocata h¸O vaao kiva hO. baahr kI ivaivaQataAaoM sao BarI duinayaa iksa manauYya ko AMtlaao-k tk Alaga Alaga ZMga sao nahIM phMucatI haogaI¸ vaao duinayaa jaba AMtlaao-k maoM AatI hO AaOr hmaaro Aayau Bar p`aPt ike hue AnauBavaaoM sao GaulatI–imalatI hO¸ tao kuC maMqana krtI hO¸ Andr–Andr. idla icaMtna krta hO AaOr idmaaga d`ivat haota hO. AaOr ek baocaOnaI haotI hO ]sa maqao hue kI¸ p`aiPt kao baahr donao kI¸ laaogaaoM kao vaapsa krnao kI. 

maqanao kI p`iËyaa maoM jaao ]pkrNa hO yaaina ik maqanaI¸ vaao hmaarI caotnaa hO¸ ivacaarQaara hO¸ hmaarI saaoca hO¸ hmaaro daSa-inak p`Baava hOM ijanasao hma lagaatar p`Baaivat haoto Aa rho hOM. matlaba yao ik baahr jaao doKa ]sakao Andr laa kr¸ saundr banaakr¸ smaRityaaoM AaOr AnauBavaaoM ko saharo ]sao kd dokr¸ ]sao sajaa saMvaarkr baahr krnaa ApnaI caotnaa ko ca@ko pr Gaumaakr¸ ApnaI bauiw kI QaurI pr ]sao Apnao AByaasa AaOr kaOSala pr gaZ,naa.

jaOsao kumhar ko pasa ek Qaagaa haota hO jaao ima+I ko banaae hue bat-naaoM kao kaTta hO¸ eosao hI Apnao sao inarpoxa krko ]sa bat-na kao baahr gaunagaunaI QaUp maoM saUKnao ko ilae rKnaa hO. @yaaoMik gaunagaunaI QaUp pyaa-Pt nahIM hO. ]sakao tao toja tap caaihe¸ Ba+I caaihe¸ Aaga caaihe¸ tBaI vah samaaja ko ilae ]pyaaogaI hao paegaa.Qyaana donao kI baat hO ima+I kao kaTnao ko ilae caakU¸ CurI AaOr tlavaar kI AavaSyakta nahIM haotI¸ ek kaomala saa Qaagaa haota hO jaao caak sao bat-na kao Alaga krta hO AaOr saQao hue haqaaoM sao Apnao ilae QartI pr ek AaQaar kI p`aiPt krta hO. kMuBakar kI pUrI p`iËyaa kivata kI p`iËyaa hO. AaOr yah BaI saMyaaoga kI baat hO ik [sa kqaa maoM jaao naayak hO vah kumhar hO. vah ABaI tk caak pr gaIlaI ima+I ko saaqa ApnaI ]MgailayaaoM kI klama sao kivata krta qaa¸ GaD,o AaOr saurahI banaata qaa¸ laoikna id@kt yao hu[- ik jaba tk ]saka maUD, haota qaa tBaI banaata qaa¸ p%naI ko tanao yaa ga`ahkaoM ko ]laahnao ]sao baaQya nahIM kr pato qao. vaao ek klaakar qaa¸ ]sao pta nahIM qaa ik vaao ek iktnaa baD,a kiva h¸O laoikna jaba Aa pD,I AaOr ]sako AaByaMtr maoM calanao vaalao caak pr rajaa kI tlavaar laTkI tao ]sanao baohtr maanaa ik rajaa kI tlavaar igaro [sasao phlao vaao Apnaa Qaagaa inakala laoM AaOr caar SabdaoM kI hI sahI¸ kivata saunaa do. 

kivata maoM caar Sabd hOM 'iballaI gayaI dUQa lauZ,kaya' [na caar SabdaoM ko baaro maoM kuC khnaa caahta hMU.

[nhIM caar SabdaoM ko maaQyama sao ek mau_a ]zata hMU $p AaOr iSalp ka. ijanhaoMnao gaiNat pZ,a hO vao jaanato hOM ik ek caIja haotI hO 'prmyaUToSana ka^mbaInaoSana'. [na caar SabdaoM ko saaolah ka^mbaInaoSana bana sakto hOM yaaina ]saI ima+I ko saaolah iSalp jaao caar mau{I Bar qaI. [nakao Aagao pICo ko Ëma maoM rKnaa gaaoyaa [namaoM ]nakao gaUqanaa hO¸ maqanaa hO¸ [namaoM panaI imalaanaa hO AaOr [nakao Alaga $p AaOr Aakar donaa hO — iballaI gayaI dUQa lauZ,kaya¸ iballaI dUQa gayaI lauZ,kaya¸ iballaI lauZ,kaya gayaI dUQa¸ gayaI iballaI dUQa lauZ,kaya¸ gayaI dUQa iballaI lauZ,kaya¸ gayaI lauZ,kaya iballaI dUQa¸ dUQa iballaI gayaI lauZ,kaya¸ dUQa gayaI iballaI lauZ,kaya¸ dUQa lauZ,kaya gayaI iballaI¸ lauZ,kaya iballaI gayaI dUQa¸ lauZkaya dUQa gayaI iballaI yaa [sa p`kar ko AaOr. 

Aba doKnaa yah hO ik p`ya%na laaGava sao yaanao kma sao kma kaoiSaSa krnao sao kaOnasaI pMi> saaolah p`karaoM maoM jyaada mafId jaatI hO. 'iballaI gayaI dUQa lauZ,kaya' [samaoM ek gait hO¸ laya hO¸ p`vaah hO jaao kumhar nao phlao batayaa. [samaoM manauYya ko )dya ka ek spMdna hO¸ vaao laya hO ijasamaoM hma saaMsa laoto hOM —'iballaI gayaI dUQa lauZ,kaya'. hma khoMgao gayaI iballaI dUQa lauZ,kaya. 'gayaI iballaI dUQa lauZ,kaya'o maoM khIM ADcana hO pZ,nao maoM. yahaM [sakao ek Alaga saaMigaitk p`Eaya donaa haogaa. Agar hma [sao kuC Qauna p`dana krnaa caahoM 'gayaI iballaI dUQa lauZ,kaya¸ ramaa ramaa hro hro.' hmanao khaM¸ iksa vaNa- pr jaaor idyaa¸ ]sasao yah kavyaa%mak hao ]za. Agar hma sapaT pZ,to tao Saayad svaIkaya- na haota. ramaa ramaa hro hro [sailae kha @yaaoMik ibanaa mauJao saunao BaI Aap [sa Qauna kao gaunagaunaa sako AaOr samaJa sako ik khaM kivata maoM AMts-aMgaIt inaiht haota hO. 'lauZ,kaya dUQa gayaI iballaI'¸ [sao khnao maoM ek AvaraoQa hO. baD,o baarIk baarIk sao Antr hOM¸ kao[- AcCa saMgaIt inado-Sak [sakao Alaga svarilaip p`dana kr sakta hO AaOr ]sao BaI laya maoM baaMQa sakta hO. 

yaMU tao Aaja AKbaar BaI gaayaa jaa sakta hO¸ rOp saMgaIt ko maaQyama sao nae nae p`yaaoga hao rho hOM¸ laoikna vah pMi> jaao Aapko Andr sao sahja saMgaIt kI ]d\Baavanaa krae vah Apnao iSalp maoM BarpUr haotI hO AaOr jahaM Aapkao Aitir> saaQanaaoM ka p`yaaoga krnaa pD,o¸ ]sakao saurmya banaanao ko ilae vao baa*ya p`ya%na haoMgao. hma maana tao jaaeMgao ik yao BaI kivata hO laoikna vaao AaOr maanak ksaaoiTyaaoM pr KrI ]trI yaa nahIM yao kha nahIM jaa sakta. kqya ek hI hO¸ ]sakao khnao ko saaolah ZMga yaa saaolah hjaar¸ kRYNa ek hO  ]nakI saaolah yaa saaolah hjaar¸ yah ]nakI AiBavyai>yaaM hOM. iktnaI hI AiBavyai>yaaM iksaI ek kqya kI hao saktI hO AaOr iktnao hI p`kar hao sakto hOM¸ vao laya maoM haoM¸ laya maoM na haoM tao baahr sao kao[- laya ]nhoM p`dana kI jaaya laoikna sabasao baiZ,yaa laya vaao hO jaao ik hmaarI saaMsa kI hO¸ hmaaro )dya ko QaD,knao kI hO¸ vaao ek tala jaao hma sabako Andr samaa[- hu[- hO. AaOr Aap doKoMgao kI saMsaar ka EaoYztma kavya vahI hO jaao saaMsa kI laya maoM inabaw haota hO. hma ]sao d`ut yaa ivalaMibat kao[- BaI zoka yaa prna do sakto hOM. AaOr k[- baar ivaraoQa BaI kr sakto hOM ik @yaaoM iksaI zoko kI AavaSyakta hO¸ hmaoM kivata maoM iksaI p`itmaana kI zokodarI nahIM caaihe. tao BaI hma maana laoMgao ik jaI haM Aapnao BaI kivata ilaKI hO. 

tao $p AaOr SaIlp jaao baahrI t%va hOM kivata ko vaao kqya yaaina ima+I kI AMt-sa%ta AaOr AMt-t%va sao banato hOM. yao gaZ,nao vaalao ka kaOSala hO. $p iSalp kaOSala hOM AaOr kqya hO ima+I jaao ik hO phlao sao ivaVmaana¸ ]samaoM hmaarI BaavanaaAaoM ka jala imalaa hO tba vaao gaIlaI hu[- hO AaOr iksaI BaI saacao maoM Zla jaanao kao tOyaar hO. baat lambaI hao jaanao ka Ktra hO laoikna maOM ]sa Ktro kao ]za laota hMU AaOr ApnaI baat bata dota hMU¸ gaunagaunaI QaUp tk phMucanao sao phlao kuC AMQaora CaMT donaa caahta hMU. Apnaa¸ svayaM sao baaticat krto hue. ek ]dahrNa AaOr dota hMU An-sT ifSar kI pustk maOMnao Apnao AQyayana kI Avasqaa maoM pZ,I qaI 'naosaoisaTI Aa^f AaT-' ]samaoM ek ]dahrNa idyaa qaa ]nhaoMnao. ]dahrNa qaa iËsTla ka. vaao ]dahrNa kivata ko iSalp kao samaJanao ko ilae Saayad Aapkao AcCa lagao AaOr ifr hma ApnaI samasyaapUit- kI pTrI pr Aa jaaeM. tao p`stut hO vaao ]dahrNa—

janaaba An-sT ifSar nao kha qaa ik yaid iksaI baIkr maoM¸ pa~ maoM¸ kTaoro maoM¸ caInaI ka saaMd` ivalayana rKoM ijasao hma caaSanaI khto hOM¸ tao qaaoDo, idna baad vaao caInaI ko ek zaosa Zolao maoM badla jaaegaa¸ iksaI saaMcao maoM rKoMgao tao dIvaalaI kI KaMD kI imaza[- bana jaaegaa. byaah SaadI ko maaOko pr KaMD kTaora kI ek rsma haotI hO ijasamaoM kTaoro maoM rKI ga[- caaSanaI sao banaI hu[- KaMD kI imaza[- ek Kasa maaOko pr laD,kI vaalaaoM kI Aaor sao dI jaatI qaI. QaIro QaIro vah KaMD kTaoro kI rsma KaMD ko banao hue ]sa maIzo Zolao ko sqaana pr dhoja ka sarfaoDU Zolaa bana ga[- AaOr pUCa jaanao lagaa ik Ba[- KaMD kTaora maoM iktnaa do rho hao. yaaina hmaarI prMpra raogaga`st hu[- AaOr hma ek Sauw maanavaIya¸ Aa%maIya maohmaananavaaja,I ko naato–irSto AaOr ]sakao rsma maoM Zalanao ko baad QaIro QaIro dhoja maoM Basma haoto gae. 

Ana-sT ifSar khto hOM ik Agar ]sa pa~ maoM¸ pa~ ko ]pr ek lakD,I maoM Qaagaa baaMQa ko ]sa ivalayana maoM Dalaa jaaya AaOr CaoD, idyaa jaaya tao ek Alaga trh kI AMtt-%vaaoM kI AaNaivak p`iËyaa¸ imaza[- ko ANauAaoM kI Aavayaivak¸ %vairt¸ jainat saMGaTnaa haotI hO AaOr pirNaama sva$p vao kNa Qaagao ko [d-igad- Apnaa sqaana banaato jaato hOM AaOr qaaoD,o hI kala maoM hmaoM imaEaI imalatI hO¸ iËsTla ko sva$p maoM. Aba yao jaao imaEaI Aapkao imalaI¸ Qaagao ko }prI Caor kao pkD, kr imaEaI kao Gaumaa[yao tao yah ]sa KaMD kTaro sao sava-qaa iBanna haogaI. [samaoM Anaok flak haoMgao¸ ip`j,maIya kaoNa haoMgao¸ eosao ik gaunagaunaI QaUp kI riva–riSmayaaM [sako Aar par jaaeM tao satrMgaI hao jaaeM. na jaanao iktnaI Aqa- kI AaBaaeM ek ek flak¸ ek ek Aayaama sao inaklaoM. [sa imaEaI kao faoD,oMgao tao Andr BaI vaOsao hI ip`jma inaklaoMgao. hr iËsTla Apnao Aap maoM saMpUNa- saMrcanaa haogaa. yao imaEaI KaMD kI tulanaa maoM svaasqya ko ilae BaI laaBakarI haogaI¸ kMz ko ilae BaI AaOr AapkI AakMz BaavanaaAaoM ko ilae BaI. 

Ana-sT ifSar pUCto hOM ik @yaa Aap baahr sao imaEaI banaa sakto hOMÆ kTaoro maoM KaMD rKko KaMD kTaora tao banaa sakto hOM laoikna imaEaI nahIM. KaMD kTaora yaa dIpavalaI ka imaza[- ka iKlaaOnaa baahr ko saaMcao sao banaayaa gayaa laoikna imaEaI banaI kqya ko AaMtirk t%va sao. [sa A%yaaQauinak tknaIkI yauga maoM saMsaar kI EaoYztma ConaI hqaaOiDyaaoM ka p`yaaoga kr ko KaMD kTaoro sao imaEaI banaanao ka p`yaasa kroMgao tao Asafla hao jaaeMgao¸ banaa nahIM paeMgao. ]tnao kaoNa¸ ]tnao Aayaama¸ ]tnaa pravat-na¸ ]tnao rMga¸ ]tnaI riSmayaaM¸ vao saIQao Qaardar ivaiBanna kaoNaaoM ko¸ samakaoNaaoM ko¸ ivaYama kaoNaaoM ko i~Bauja¸ catuBa-uja— yao Anaok Aayaama kqya kI AMt-Sai> qao ijasanao ik $p ka inamaa-Na ikyaa¸ AMdr baahr sao. 

[saka matlaba yao ik $p BaI kao[- baahrI caIja nahIM hO¸ $p AMdr sao Aata hO. kivata maoM Aap Agar ]sao AlaMkaraoM sao sajaanaa caahoMgao AaOr bahut jyaada tukoM imalaanao ka BaI ek str pr p`yaasa kroMgao tao hao sakta hO ik baahrI AlaMkrNa AaOr tuk imalaanao ko p`yaasa maoM Baava kI h%yaa ko rhto kivata pUrI tukbandI bana kr rh jaae . ]samaoM vastu kI AMtSa-i> na hao¸ t%vaaoM ka Aavayaivak saMgazna na hao ijasao hma Aa^rga^inak yauinaTI khto hOM¸ vaao na hao¸ saMpUNa-ta na hao¸ bailk basa ek saacaa hao jaao Aapnao iksaI sao lao ilayaa yaa Kud BaI banaayaa¸ calaao¸ laoikna saaMcao maoM Zlaogaa tao hr baar vahI. imaEaI kBaI punaravaRi%t nahIM krtI¸ ijatnaI baar Qaagaa DalaoMgao ]tnaI baar Alaga Aakar ga`hNa krogaI vaao imaza[-. haM¸ maanaa ik imaEaI sama$p nahIM¸ hr baar Alaga Alaga¸ inaralaI. khIM iksaI idSaa maoM jyaada baZ, ga[- hOM tao khIM kma rh ga[- hO. Qaagao ko caaraoM Aaor barabar nyaaya krtI hu[- nahIM ilapTI. yagaNa magaNa tgaNa yamaatarajaBaanasalagaa ko isawaMt palana krto hue CMdbaw nahIM rhI. laoikna ]samaoM khIM kao[- laya hO¸ jaba hma ]sao taoDoM,gao AaOr AMdr tk jaaeMgao tao doKoMgao ik vah kNa kNa ibaKrnao ko baavajaUd AMdr tk saundr inaklaogaI. 

maOM [sa ]dahrNa sao bahut p`Baaivat hMU¸ AaOr yah maanata hMU ik kivata maoM Asala Sai> ]sakI AMt-vastu kI haotI hO¸ baa*ya$p kOsao BaI bana jaae. [saIilae [na kivataAaoM kao panao ko baad maoM¸ maOM baa*ya $p kI tulanaa maoM [sakI AMt-vastu sao jyaada $ba$ haonao kI kaoiSaSa krta rha. AaOr Alaga Alaga QaagaaoM pr ilapTI hu[- Alaga Alaga imaiEayaaoM kao vagaI-kRt krnao kI kaoiSaSa maoM lagaa rha. kuC vagaI-krNa phlao sao hmaaro pasa hO¸ doKto hOM ik vao @yaa hOM AaOr gaunagaunaI QaUp kI jaao imaEaI banaI hO ]sakao kOsao Alagaayaa jaa sakta hO.

maoro saamanao 'gaunagaunaI QaUp' imaEaI ko CaoTo baD,o KNDaoM maoM ibaKrI hu[- hO. AaOr saaqa maoM hI ek saaqa Anaok rMgaaoM kI CTa ibaKra ga[- hO. khIM Atukant hO mau>CMd¸ khIM CMd maoM hOM¸ khIM ek jaOsao Aayaama imalato hOM tao gaIt bana ga[- hO¸ khIM yah imaEaI QaUp kI imaEaI ga,ja,la bana kr inaklaI hO¸ khIM mau>k kavya ko Anaok $paoM maoM idKa[- dotI hO¸ tao khIM yao naj,ma banakr Aa[- hO. maaoTo maaoTo yao C: ivaBaajana tao ike hI jaa sakto hOM.

  • Atukant kivata¸ 
  • tukant laoikna p`vaah maoM mau> CMd¸ 
  • tIsara gaIt¸ 
  • caaOqaa gaja,la¸ 
  • mau>k 
  • AaOr Cza naj,ma. 

[namaoM AMtr @yaa hO yao jaao saaih%yaSaas~ ko &ata hI jaanato hOM laoikna Apnao ]na sauQaI pazkaoM ko ilae jaao ihndI kivata sao naoh rKto hOM laoikna maoM Saas~ jaanaa nahIM caaha kBaI yaa Avasar nahIM imalaa¸ ]nako ilae bahut saMixaPt maoM [naka AMtr bata donaa caahta hMU. hmaaro yahaM kavya kao dao BaagaaoM maoM ivaBa> ikyaa gayaa hO¸ p`baMQa kavya AaOr mau>k kavya. p`baMQa kavya ko puna: dao Baod ike jaato hOM¸ mahakavya AaOr KMD kavya. samasyaapUit- maoM mahakavya AaOr KMDkavyaaoM kao inamaMi~t nahIM ikyaa gayaa hO. tao ifr bacata hO mau>k. laoikna mau>k BaI $Z, hao calaa hO¸ ApnaI na[- pirBaaYaaeM banaakr. mau>k sao hmaara AaSaya hO¸ caar pMi>yaaoM maoM rcaa gayaa mau>k yaa C: pMi>yaaoM ka kuNDilayaa CMd¸ Aaz pMi> ka kiva%t¸ daoha BaI mau>k ko AMtga-t Aata hO¸ saaorza BaI Aata hO. paMca daoho Agar haoM tao hma ]sao samasyaapUit- ko ilae p`ivaiYT maanaoMgao. mau>k ko AMtga-t vao CMdbaw CaoTI CaoTI rcanaaeM hOM jaao kiva%t hOM yaa daoha hOM¸ savaOyaa hOM yaa saaorza hOM. 

[sa baar tao ijatnaI BaI p`ivaiYTyaaM Aa[-¸ sabakao svaIkar ikyaa jaaegaa @yaaoMik inayama hmanao banaae nahIM hOM AaOr kivataAaoM ko janatM~ maoM inayama BaI QaIro QaIro banaoMgao. AgalaI samasyaapUit- ko ilae phlaI samasyaapUit- ek AaQaar ka inamaa-Na krogaI ijasapr inayamaaoM kI iBai%t banaogaI AaOr Aap sahmat haoMgao ik haM [na AaQaaraoM kao maanaa jaanaa caaihe.

  • mau>k ko AMtga-t nyaUnatma paMca daohoM¸ yaa dao kuNDilayaaM¸ dao savaOyao¸ dao kiva%t¸ nyaUnatma dao $baa[- yaa kta. ek EaoNaI yah banatI hO AaOr ]samaoM jaao sava-EaoYz haogaa ]sao purskRt ikyaa jaaegaa. 
  • dUsara hO gaIt¸ gaIt maoM ek mauKD,a haota hO AaOr AMtraoM maoM ]sa mauKD,o ka duKD,a haota hO. tIna AMtraoM ka gaIt ek sahI p`ivaiYT maanaa jaaegaa. 
  • [saI p`kar nyaUnatma paMca SaoraoM kI gaj,ala Apoixat rhogaI. 
  • Atukant kivata maoM vao kivataeM BaI svaIkar kI jaaeMgaI ijasamaoM laya ka AvaraoQa hO laoikna kqya maoM ek gamBaIr baaoQa hO. Aaj,aadI ko baad hmaaro doSa maoM¸ Aaj,aadI ko baad @yaa¸ sana 42 maoM jaba 'tar saPtk' ka p`kaSana huAa¸ Atukant kivata ka calana baZ, gayaa. maj,aak maoM rbarCnd BaI kha gayaa ]sakao¸ CndhIna BaI kha gayaa¸ mau>CMd BaI kha gayaa AaOr yah kt[- AavaSyak nahIM maanaa gayaa ik ]samaoM kao[- laya hao¸ p`vaah hao¸ ]samaoM gaVa%mak rhto hue BaI kiva%va hao sakta hO. AalaaocakaoM ka ek vaga- eosaa hO jaao khta hO ik jaao Cndbaw nahIM hO¸ tukant nahIM hO vaao kavya nahIM hO. maOM pUrI trh [nasao sahmat nahIM hMU. kivata hao saktI hO¸ gaV maoM BaI¸ gaVnaumaa BaI¸ yaid ]saka &anaa%mak saMvaodna du$st hO AaOr kao[- eosaI baat hO jaao klpnaa¸ bauiw AaOr Baavanaa ko yaaoga sao banaI hO. tao tIsara vaga- huAa hmaara ]na AtukaMt kivataAaoM ka ijasamaoM laya Aqavaa p`vaah nahIM BaI hO tao calaogaa. 
  • AaOr caaOqaa hO ]na tukant kivataAaoM ka vaga- jaao Cndbaw nahIM hOM laoikna ek p`vaah kao vao maanatI hOM. maOM p`aya: eosaI kivataeM ilaKta hMU ijasamaoM tuk imalatI hOM laoikna sadOva ]samaoM CMd hao AavaSyak nahIM. maorI ijatnaI kqaap`Qaana kivataeM hOM¸ lambaI lambaI kivataeM hOM¸ ]namaoM tukaoM ka inavaa-h rhta hO laoikna vao samaana maa~aAaoM ko inayamaaoM ka palana nahIM krtIM. hma ]nhoM mau>CMd tukant kivataeM khoMgao. 
  • Agalaa vaga- hO naj,ma ka Cza vaga-. naj,ma AaOr tukant CndhIna kivata maoM qaaoD,asaa fk- hO. tukant CndhIna kivata ek p`vaah maoM calatI hO AaOr yah p`vaah ]sao ek eosaI tala dota hO jaao ik prspr maO~I krto hue badlatI BaI rh saktI hO. laoikna p`vaah maoM AvaraoQa nahIM haota. eosao jaOsao nadI bahtI hO AaOr lahr kBaI }McaI hao saktI hO kBaI CaoTI¸ kBaI vah sapaT BaI hao saktI hO laoikna GaaT kao spYT krto hue¸ tukaoM ko baMQana maoM svayaM kao samaoTto hue Aagao baZ,tI hO. jabaik ]d-U maoM naj,ma ek eosaI ivaQaa hO jaao laya pr AaQaairt hOM jahaM tk maOM samaJata hMU. ]samaoM ek laya calatI hO¸ 'kBaI kBaI maoro idla maoM Kyaala Aata hO'¸ Agar Aap [sakao eosao BaI pZ,oMgao tao ek laya maoM baat haogaI AaOr yah ja$rI nahIM ik ]saka tuk Kasa dUrI ko baad badlao. tuk hao BaI saktI hO¸ nahIM BaI hao saktI laoikna laya [sakI Ainavaaya- Sat- hO. 

maOMnao 'gaunagaunaI QaUp hO' [sa spQaa- ko ilae jaao kivataeM Aa[-M¸ ]nakao C: vagaao-M maoM ivaBa> ikyaa hO. ifr sao bata dota hMU¸ Ëma [sakao Aagao pICo kr ilayaa jaaya – phlaa vaga-–mau>CMd Atukant¸ dUsara–mau>CMd tukant¸ tIsara–gaIt¸ caaOqaa–mau>k¸ paMcavaaM–gaj,ala AaOr Cza–naj,ma. [sa p`kar ijatnaI kivataeM Aa[-M¸ ]namaoM C: ka cayana krnaa hOM [na Alaga Alaga Aakar ko ibaKro hu[- imaEaI KNDaoM ko AaQaar pr.

 

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